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Posts : 315 WL Points : 130748 Join date : 2010-02-20 Age : 30 Location : Wandering around in Wonderland (Tis what I do best)
| Subject: The Luckiest Girl: Chapter One, Part Three Tue Sep 21, 2010 5:02 pm | |
| "Sarah's got a boyfriend, Sarah's got a boyfriend!" Grace sand, prancing around me in the crowded halls. "I do NOT!" I pressed, feeling my cheeks grow hot again. Grace only smiled and hummed to the tune of her little song. I sighed, and looked around, hoping to see that brown shag of hair that made my day. Stop it! Stop it, stop it, stop it! I scolded myself. Why was I looking for him anyway? He had all the crazy fans that he needed. Why should I even bother? I pretended to concentrate on my homework, trying to ignore Grace and her tunes.
The next few weeks were the same: I tried to ignore Justin, failed, kicked myself for it, and repeat.
However, this Saturday was the one that would change my life forever. | |
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Rachelle41 Instructor
Posts : 269 WL Points : 29898 Join date : 2010-02-26 Age : 27 Location : Witts End.
| Subject: I'm Replying! Tue Sep 21, 2010 5:22 pm | |
| Ohhhhhh, great hanger, Cheez! I can't wait to see what happens next! I've been a fan since your first post of this story, and I' love it. You should open a poll on it soon. See how the public likes it and everything. I know that this is a website for people and thier creative ideas, but you don't want to keep posting a story that very few people like. I hope you will not take offense by the latter. Please continue, i think that it has an awesome plot and you are adding some really good points to the story. One thing really great about the plot is the main character. Most girls would be screaming and in hysterics, but this girl isn't. She doesn't want to be a fan of Justin Bieber, and she doesn't want to be, ever. However, love dose show up in mysterious ways. Anyway, keep going, it's great! -Rachelle41 | |
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cheez_burger Admin
Posts : 315 WL Points : 130748 Join date : 2010-02-20 Age : 30 Location : Wandering around in Wonderland (Tis what I do best)
| Subject: Re: The Luckiest Girl: Chapter One, Part Three Tue Sep 21, 2010 8:18 pm | |
| Well, I don't want to post a poll, because then I'd seen a little paranoid at how much people like my work. I just go with the flow, letting the reviews speak for themselves. | |
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