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 The Luckiest Girl: Chapter One

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PostSubject: The Luckiest Girl: Chapter One   The Luckiest Girl: Chapter One EmptyTue Aug 31, 2010 8:17 pm

"Sarah? Saaarahhh?" Grace was waving her hand in front of my face as we walked down the white halls to our class, a disgruntled look on her face.
"Huh? What?" I looked around. "Oh! Sorry, Grace just..." I stopped myself. "...Just not feeling well."
Grace sighed, and rolled her eyes. "Gosh, Sarah ever since you..." Her eyes widened, then a devilish smile crept across her cheeks. "Really, Sarah?" I sighed, AGAIN, and gave her a tell-someone-and-you're-dead look. She simply smiled an innocent smile, and skipped into her next class.

Nice first day of school, huh?

But wait! There's more.

As I found my next class, science, the bell rang. I hurtled down the hall and stumbled into class, tripping on a small ledge I'd overlooked. My teacher, as well as all of the other twenty-nine students in the class, were staring at me as I gathered my papers. Trying not to cause more of a scene, the teacher smiled and pointed to my seat. I smiled slightly, nodded, and made my way around the edge of the room. As I set ym stuff down, I fixed my hair, then heard a chillingly farmiliar voice.
"You just can't seem to find your balance, now, can you?"
And there they were, those dark brown eyes.
Right next to me.
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PostSubject: I'm replying!   The Luckiest Girl: Chapter One EmptyWed Sep 01, 2010 5:07 pm

Awesome, Cheez! I knew you would write more, and you did, which just made the story even better! You should(eventually) puit everything together so we can read the story all over again. Keep on writing!
-Rachelle41 I love you
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PostSubject: Re: The Luckiest Girl: Chapter One   The Luckiest Girl: Chapter One EmptyWed Sep 01, 2010 5:15 pm

OH MY GOSH!!!!!!!!! It's LLLLLLLLLLUUUUUUUUUUVVVVVVVVVV!!!!!!!!!!!! I love a good love story, don't you? keep it up Cheez. I know you can do it.
Keep it up.
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