Arrow
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Location : Stalking my next prey >:)
 |  Subject: Tiger Fight Sat Jan 01, 2011 2:35 pm | |
| Dark light in my eyes
anger is my haze
My claws want purchase
red is my gaze
Fear is your eyes
flitting through face
now it is steal
without a trace
I pull up my sneer
and replace it with scowl
I lower my tail
its time for the prowl
crouching fire
claws unsheathed
it is time
RELEASE THE BEAST
I know it needs punctuation but could anyone help?
Last edited by Arrow on Thu Jan 13, 2011 2:30 pm; edited 3 times in total | |
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Luv2Type
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Join date : 2010-02-22
Age : 27
Location : Atlanta, Geogria
| | Subject: Re: Tiger Fight Sat Jan 01, 2011 6:56 pm | |
| Okay, I like it, but since its uncompleted I guess I can't completely judge. Finish soon please! | |
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