Tobi-chan Admin
Posts : 360 WL Points : 30037 Join date : 2010-04-29 Age : 30 Location : Looking for a way out of Purgatory.
| Subject: At Last, Hope Sun Dec 12, 2010 12:21 am | |
| At Last, Hope a poem by Tobi J. A hand, ever so gentle Graces the snow, Ever so lightly A face, ever so peaceful Looks out into the distance, Ever so calmly A time will come to pass When this moment will end The truth will sink in Tranquility lost But for now, ever so brilliantly, Hope will prevail, Ever so beautifully Acceptance, ever so heartening Will shine upon that face, And take that hand, Guiding, ever so carefully This is the end, ever so sorrowful Yet the light seen, Ever so bright Is not an illusion The road does not end here Will it ever? Not so long as this, the final moment Is one of hope I pretty much never write poetry that's at all happy, but I was listening to the "Song Of Parting", and this is what came out. ;D Hope it's not too bad, I only write poetry on the rare occasions I'm feeling a tad sentimental. ~Tobi~
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Rachelle41 Instructor
Posts : 269 WL Points : 29898 Join date : 2010-02-26 Age : 27 Location : Witts End.
| Subject: Re: At Last, Hope Wed Dec 15, 2010 6:27 pm | |
| I think your poem was beautiful. Death is something we must all face; I've known that since I was 6. A poem that isn't too dark, but true, is wonderful. Most poeple avoid thinking about death, but it's going to happen, no matter how much you don't want it too, so why not come to terms with it? Again, great job Tobi. -Rachelle41 | |
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