Dangerous Love secrets- Chapter 2 part 1

"I can't do this," I said to him after we had broken apart.Though I didn't let him speak before I said ", I gotta go, and we WILL talk about this later."
I jogged into the shadows with my still soaked sneakers and hair that was half dry. I shifted then and let hands melt into wings, skin melt into feathers, and mouth run to beak, and let my body shrink until all that was left was a heap of clothing and a green breasted hummingbird.
"Wait, Gabby!" I knew tha was him but as I flew away I also knew that he knew what I was.

*SCREAMS* Amazing!!!! More, more, more!!! I love it!! I LOVE it! I swear, you will make me explode into a trillion smithereens before the week is over!! It's brilliant! I'm exaggerating but I don't give a care! I am addicted to this thingy now!
~ A VERY Explosive Nikki
P.S. It's only a matter of time..... Tick....Tock....

Wait a second? They became a humming bird? Why? How? Way to keep the reader hanging! High five! Humming bids are wonderful aren't they! *looks up in compassion* Anyway, like I said, good stopping place! Really keeps the reader hanging! That's how you keep them interested, and preventing them from tossing the book across the room. Although, I know no one would do that to one of your books, their the best! The thought wouldn't even enter this solar system!