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Rachelle41 Instructor
Posts : 269 WL Points : 28888 Join date : 2010-02-26 Age : 26 Location : Witts End.
| Subject: Guess Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:58 pm | |
| This I another poem that I had to write for school, and I would really like some feedback befor Friday. Also, try to guess what it is.
It flows with life and goes where it wants yet is also restricted
The mind plays the biggest role but so does a pen and paper
Some see it as comprehension and it can be read by those that speak it's language and it's many dialects
It shows beauty, grace and poise thourgh trills and bells Or is short, excited, and rough with a crash or bang!
Heard in every living thing yet not heard at all It shall live forever in a presence of awe. | |
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Luv2Type Instructor
Posts : 402 WL Points : 31649 Join date : 2010-02-22 Age : 26 Location : Atlanta, Geogria
| Subject: Re: Guess Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:27 pm | |
| Is it books? Reading? I seriously have no idea, but the 'it can be read' part opens up the book/reading idea. What about our hearts? Sometimes people can 'read' those. Gosh, you made this hard. | |
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Rachelle41 Instructor
Posts : 269 WL Points : 28888 Join date : 2010-02-26 Age : 26 Location : Witts End.
| Subject: Re: Guess Thu Feb 24, 2011 9:35 pm | |
| I shall wait for a few more people to guess before I reveal the mystery. However, it itsn't books/reading, although that is a very good guess. | |
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giraffe22 Junior Writer
Posts : 82 WL Points : 25021 Join date : 2010-11-26 Age : 25 Location : Camp Half-Blood during the Summer or Hogwarts during the school year.
| Subject: Re: Guess Thu Feb 24, 2011 10:23 pm | |
| Good poem! I am guessing ........ Nature? | |
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Rachelle41 Instructor
Posts : 269 WL Points : 28888 Join date : 2010-02-26 Age : 26 Location : Witts End.
| Subject: Re: Guess Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:14 pm | |
| It's not nature either, although, I can see your point of view. Keep on guessing! -Rachelle41 | |
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Luv2Type Instructor
Posts : 402 WL Points : 31649 Join date : 2010-02-22 Age : 26 Location : Atlanta, Geogria
| Subject: Re: Guess Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:55 pm | |
| Oh come on. Uhhhhhh-imagination! Ha ha! I bet I'm right! | |
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Rachelle41 Instructor
Posts : 269 WL Points : 28888 Join date : 2010-02-26 Age : 26 Location : Witts End.
| Subject: Re: Guess Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:33 pm | |
| No, it's not imagination either. I'll give you a hint. Most people like it, and alot of people can make it, although there's a lot more to learn that what appears at first. -Rachelle41 | |
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giraffe22 Junior Writer
Posts : 82 WL Points : 25021 Join date : 2010-11-26 Age : 25 Location : Camp Half-Blood during the Summer or Hogwarts during the school year.
| Subject: Re: Guess Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:51 pm | |
| My sister Jeana guessed this, Peace! | |
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