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Rachelle41
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PostSubject: Searching   Searching EmptyFri Jan 21, 2011 6:45 pm

Sometimes in life
you gotta let things go
You gotta let dreams die,
you gotta let lovers go
And relize what
you're searchin for
you might already
have found.
And sometimes what you've found
is really all ya need
Because there's a reason that
you've got it,
and if you don't want it
someday you will.
So treasure it, love it
because once it's time to let it go
you'll be searchin again
and sometimes searchin
is harder than letting go.
Because when you let go
you just let go.
But when you start searchin again
you realize that
it's truly gone
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PostSubject: Re: Searching   Searching EmptyFri Jan 21, 2011 10:27 pm

Wow! I love it! The last part

"So treasure it, love it
because once it's time to let it go
you'll be searchin again
and sometimes searchin
is harder than letting go.
Because when you let go
you just let go.
But when you start searchin again
you realize that
it's truly gone"

That part is SO true and so-pretty. I don't know how to truly describe this poem, but I really like it! Searching is a wonderful title. What was your inspiration for this? I really love it. Excellent job.
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