Arrow
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 |  Subject: Ruby- the hound Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:40 am | |
| Darkest day
Lightest hour
Blue as water
Ruby's hour
paw by paw
through the light
there she walks
shadow's night
a thistle up on
her ruddy tale
a tickles hair
stays through the hail
and last not least
all in the powers
brace youself
for Ruby's Hour | |
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Luv2Type
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| | Subject: Re: Ruby- the hound Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:43 pm | |
| Hm. Go rhyme, but maybe you could use some punctuation? Otherwise, we read write through the thing, though I have the feeling you want us to pause at every line. | |
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Arrow
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| | Subject: OOOOOOPS Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:40 am | |
| Excuse my lack of punctuation. Sometimes I get so excited I just keep on writing. 'll fix it. Thanks Luv! | |
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cheez_burger
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| | Subject: Re: Ruby- the hound Tue Dec 28, 2010 3:13 pm | |
| I must remind you not to use the Decriptions or Title Color options, Arrow. They're for Admins only ^^ | |
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Arrow
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| | Subject: Ohhh Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:21 pm | |
| I'm sorry, I didn't no. My bad | |
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