The old soul- preview

They all went to heaven or hell. But not me. Why? Because of me being a curious cat.I died and never will again. Even if you stabbed me through the heart and burned my body, I would reincarnate. As another human, a flower, a dolphin, but if it lives I can be it. Not a single religion can explain what I am. I know though, that I am an old soul. This damned curse of immortality. You'll never know what it's like to live, life after life after life. As where others live there lives and go on to the spring gardens of epithelial or the fields of punishment. My first life was my best one and it must have started somewhat like this....

At that time I was Alaria the King's daughter. That life was full of glamor,glory and riches, but most of all, it was filled with love. I had been in love. I was loved and it was good. Back then I was human. It was before the... accident. When I had finally died at the age of 45(back then humans died young) I was at judgment. Now, I bet your saying, you saw god, or you met Allah or, you saw Abraham the father. Heck no. Because whoever it was, this being of glory, was not to be seen by the likes of an unworthy human. His body was beacon of light, if it was a body. Whoever it was was all powerful. So basically my, life wasn't all that horrible, so I did make it to the good side of the afterlife world. I won't say heaven of whatever y'all say. Because here there was a lot of... beauty. It wasn't in the clouds. It was a garden of everything imaginable. I will get into what I saw in another story. After many seasons of life there,as an angel, I messed up. There was a black border to the garden that was full of shadows and evil. I had the mistake of wondering what was there.I was stripped of my wings(I have the scars to prove)and thrown back to earth as he punishment was eternal life. I couldn't see what a curse it was until many year later. This is where the story starts, beause when I was striped of my angelic wings, I had one pair left. My wings of the shadows. After finding these I took up the name with my new skills. Arrow... the old soul

Woah.
Deep. I like the sense of mystery you put in there! More! Do more!


Cheez

Now you know that everyone dies right? That this MUST BE fiction. It is deep and mysterious, good elements of a book, but we all die. Now one can never die. Your soul has one life (at least thats what I beleive), then you die. You can't have an 'old soul', but its starting to sound like a pretty good mystery book, just remember the truth (no offense to anyone).

Luv, not everyone believes that, and this is strictly for REVIEWS and constructive criticism. You never know. Maybe it's nonfiction.

Tell me about if it is good and if I am getting religion out of the way with the after life thing please?