NikkiSwift Honorable Writer
Posts : 225 WL Points : 29164 Join date : 2010-05-14 Age : 26 Location : Camp Half Blood ♥
| Subject: I Don't Wanna Go There Anymore Mon May 17, 2010 8:45 pm | |
| Member down by the creek Just you and me Splashed each other In our plain ole Ts.
But I member those stairs That we sat on Just you and me And you got down on one knee And said 'Marry me today' 'Before you wish your life away.'
Flowers in my hair Petals everywhere You looked in my eyes Told me that you'll me Forever mine But now I Am not so sure of that.
Now I sit down Down by that creek I think about What when wrong Wrong with me
I should have waited longer I wasn't ready Ready for love Or this family
I could go back To every laugh But I don't wanna go there anymore.
But I rethink those steps And those words That you said But whats next? I don't wanna think about this anymore.
I take off that ring Given to me in the spring By that liar Who never really loved me And I threw it in the fire And burn it to smithereens.
I don't wanna think I don't wanna touch I don't wanna go there Anymore. ~Nikki
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Luv2Type Instructor
Posts : 402 WL Points : 32659 Join date : 2010-02-22 Age : 27 Location : Atlanta, Geogria
| Subject: Re: I Don't Wanna Go There Anymore Mon May 24, 2010 5:32 pm | |
| Awesome! I love it! I mean, awesome, cool, incrediable. I like the romance, the heart break, the unhappily ever after. More like it! Maybe from her daughters point of view. . . if she has a daughter. But I like it. More like it! More! (please *cute smile and baby eyes*) | |
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NikkiSwift Honorable Writer
Posts : 225 WL Points : 29164 Join date : 2010-05-14 Age : 26 Location : Camp Half Blood ♥
| Subject: Aww thanks! Mon May 24, 2010 10:07 pm | |
| Aw... I didn't know that you liked so much! I was wondering 'bout about putting this through her ex-husband's view, and how he cheated and how he well, you know. But ya! I love the daughter's point of view! Totally somethin' to think 'bout! *Jumps up and down as if about to meet Taylor Swift* | |
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Luv2Type Instructor
Posts : 402 WL Points : 32659 Join date : 2010-02-22 Age : 27 Location : Atlanta, Geogria
| Subject: Re: I Don't Wanna Go There Anymore Tue May 25, 2010 5:30 pm | |
| Good idea about the ex-husbands view too! Maybe. . . he cheated first. And she found out. So 1) She cheats back to make him feel bad/for revenge/to teach him a lesson. 2) She confronts him and he doesn't say sorry/she starts to file for a divorce/ they talk and decide together on divorce. But hey, those are just suggestions. I'm sure whatever you write will be good. | |
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