NikkiSwift Honorable Writer
Posts : 225 WL Points : 29164 Join date : 2010-05-14 Age : 26 Location : Camp Half Blood ♥
| Subject: The Marines Bride Sun May 16, 2010 2:38 pm | |
| The Marines Bride A veil as white as snow draped over her face A bouquet of white roses Her dress lined with the finest lace A smile as beautiful as the stars.
She walked down the aisle with charm and grace The look changed on her face From a beautiful white gown to a black dress Tears welled up in her crystal blue eyes.
She saw the soldiers from the military All lined up saluting She heard the drums from the military band Those white flowers fell from her hand.
She fell to her knees Hoping this was just a dream She could feel all the emptiness inside It was a different kind of pain The kind that never goes away.
She fell back to her knees In front of his tombstone Placed the torn and blood stained flag down She did so without a single sound.
She took out his final letter to her She started singing his favorite song in a whisper In her sweetest voice She took out her knife.
'This is crazy I know' 'But I loved you so' And with that said She bowed her head
Right then and there A tear of happiness arose It touched the tip of her nose Something he always used to do.
Without giving a second thought She raised the knife And ended her life There lay her lifeless body next to his If only life were as simple as one little kiss. ~Nikki
(Dedicated to all of those fallen soldiers)
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Tobi-chan Admin
Posts : 360 WL Points : 30037 Join date : 2010-04-29 Age : 30 Location : Looking for a way out of Purgatory.
| Subject: Oooo nice Mon May 17, 2010 6:20 am | |
| Ooooo I love this one~! My favorite kind of depressing poetry~! Awesome job, Nikki-chan!! I luv this lil' face here, don't mind me... The tragic tale of two lovers...and of course the marine gets killed off, 'cause it'd be all icky and happy if he didn't. The suicide was a surprising twist, though. I definitely didn't see that coming. Great job~! ~Tobi~ ~I love this little twirly thing too~ | |
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