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PostSubject: A tribut to Carter Hudson   Mon Apr 19, 2010 11:45 pm

Ferocity is a trait to make you formidable
Courage is the light I have seen in your eyes
Love is what you always share with others
your strength is something noone can deny
Your Compasion is something I've seen nothing compare
Your heart is pure gold, better than any that's been bought
Your soul is so bright, I and yet slightly contained
under control, not wild and forgotten
You yourself Carter are a mythical wonder
your Character proud and as stuborn as a bull
but your stature is strong anyone might ponder
yet your intelligence is something anyone can say true
pretty browns eyes make a beautiful stare
You don't hesitate to make it known that you really care
Someday Carter your dreams will come true
For what you bring us with your smile that makes 2......... Hundred

Integretity and beauty rolled up in one plus 7000 pounds of awesome like fun all of this rolled up in one
whoever said small coundnt bring a big bang,
Oh and I don't mean size, oh I dare not decree
plus it's the inside that counts really any
what I mean is your stand
yes your popular indeed bet your not overly boastful or even snotty
With kind brown eyes and a welcoming smile
Yourheart ad I jinjinuity last a long while
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PostSubject: Re: A tribut to Carter Hudson   Wed Apr 21, 2010 7:23 am

That was really good! I liked it!
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PostSubject: Re: A tribut to Carter Hudson   Thu Apr 22, 2010 7:22 pm

Nice arrow. Good ryhme. It only makes me think of how much I miss Carter. And how weird it is to have her gone. And how much you don't know what you've got. . . until its gone.
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