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PostSubject: The Poem Subjects   Fri Mar 26, 2010 7:48 pm

Alright, time for yet another challenge! This one is where you have to make a poem about an ostrich, a lollipop, and my left toe.
Example:
Her left toe is like
an ostrich in the desert
who eats lollipops


It doesn't have to be a Haiku, it can be a limerik, a freeverse, or even a villanelle. Any type of poetry is welcome here, and the deadline is Friday April 9th. Good luck!


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PostSubject: The desert heat.   Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:35 am

The desert heat go to me
Though I knew it was soon to be
It was hot and dry and full of sun,
I fell until the day is done.
I let my head loll in the sand
I wish I had the walmart brand.
Was that me who made that foolish demand?
I thought I was crazy as but soon would I know
I didn't have that much farther to go
Because up came an explorer on his ostrich
eating a baloney sandwich
I said
Can I have a piece of that?
He said,
Nope
He went on his way
I waited one more day.
Next came a 6 year old boy
playing with his yo-yo toy
sucking on huge red pop'
Hey
will you break of the top?

then he said
Nope.
I waited one last day.
Next
up to me came
Cheez
yelling out the beezez neez
After an hour I said
Oh jeez,
I'd do anything not not to know.
I'll even suck little chezez toe!
Then I said to her
Hey You know what
I got to go
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PostSubject: Re: The Poem Subjects   Thu Jun 10, 2010 6:30 pm

Thats good! Rather than the sucking on the toe part, but really, its good! Crative! Pretty awesome!
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PostSubject: Re: The Poem Subjects   Sun Oct 10, 2010 4:04 pm

Okay. I am going to try this even though I am very late.

Ostrich.
Desert.
Lolly pop.
What a weird little poem.
Little toes.
Big toes.
Medium toes.
What a weird little poem.

Is that good? I think it's sorta funny and really stupid.
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PostSubject: Re: The Poem Subjects   Sun Oct 10, 2010 6:19 pm

No creativity in there whatsoever. BE CREATIVE xD

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PostSubject: Re: The Poem Subjects   Sat Jan 08, 2011 7:10 pm

I now take great offense. So, I will rewrite this to PROVE I am awesome.

In a desert, there lived,
an ostrich,
who ate lolly pops,
because she was a princess.

In another desert, there ran,
an evil ostrich,
who stole small toes,
from everything it saw.

The ostriches met.
She shared her lolly pops.
He shared his toes.
And everyone lived happily ever after.
Except those who lost there toes to the happy ostrich couple.

Do you like that better?!
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PostSubject: Re: The Poem Subjects   Sat Jan 08, 2011 7:22 pm

One day
ostrichs will take over
the world
they will steal childrens lolly pops
and adults toes
They steal their big toes
so they cannot walk
then they fry their heds
to make fried lolly pops
once they have conquered the world
they will eat all their lolly pops
then they will get fat
and people in wheelchairs
will kill all the evil ostrichs
and mankind will domintae once more


~I know this wasn't really a poem, but it won't end life on this planet, so does it really matter?
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PostSubject: Re: The Poem Subjects   Mon Jan 10, 2011 12:02 pm

That was okay. Funny, I guess. It was still a poem because anything can be a poem. But may I suggest that next time you use some puncuation? Unless you want it to be read like one long sentence, put in comma's and period's and everything like that.
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