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PostSubject: Pain. Faces.Deuces   Sat Aug 27, 2011 10:55 pm

Last time I saw you
I cried out my heartache.
Everytime I loved you
you saw me-you run away.

Last time I met you
I offered up my soul to you,
you took it in your hand
and I watched you rip it into two,

never thought what I thought you'd do,
never saw what I see in you,
now everytime I look in your eyes,
all i see is the monster in you,

never will anyone take my
never will I repeat the stand,
and I'll look in their faces
and I'll see the monster I am.

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PostSubject: Re: Pain. Faces.Deuces   Sun Aug 28, 2011 11:07 am

Its very well written, I like it. it's very truthful about what girls are going through. What was the inspiration for it? I hope you didn't get your heart broken by some big loof.
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