Arrow Instructor
Posts : 122 WL Points : 28298 Join date : 2010-02-22 Age : 26 Location : Stalking my next prey >:)
| Subject: Advice to the Wiser Thu Jul 14, 2011 12:34 am | |
| Don't focus on things you cannot change, or give up when the times are down,
Try not dwell on past convictions, be open to somethings new
Open your heart to new found heartache never be afraid to feel
Never ever let someones issue point you to an iron heart | |
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Rachelle41 Instructor
Posts : 269 WL Points : 28708 Join date : 2010-02-26 Age : 26 Location : Witts End.
| Subject: Re: Advice to the Wiser Mon Jul 18, 2011 1:37 pm | |
| I like this. It was very well written, with no overly obnoxious rhyming, but with just enough to make it tasteful. Your poem speaks the truth, about perserverance, hope, acceptance, and love. Even though those things are different, you brought them together with some lovely, simple words. What was your inspiration? They often come from the starngest places but can have such an affect it's crazy. I hope that you can continue to write such wonderful, mature, beautiful things. -Rachelle41 | |
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