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Rachelle41
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Age : 26
Location : Witts End.
|  Subject: Guess Wed Feb 16, 2011 8:58 pm | |
| This I another poem that I had to write for school, and I would really like some feedback befor Friday. Also, try to guess what it is.
It flows with life
and goes where it wants
yet is also restricted
The mind plays the
biggest role
but so does
a pen and paper
Some see it as comprehension
and it can be read
by those that speak it's language
and it's many dialects
It shows beauty, grace and poise
thourgh trills and bells
Or is short, excited, and rough
with a crash or bang!
Heard in every living thing
yet not heard at all
It shall live forever
in a presence of
awe. | |
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Luv2Type
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Posts : 402
WL Points : 31579
Join date : 2010-02-22
Age : 26
Location : Atlanta, Geogria
| | Subject: Re: Guess Tue Feb 22, 2011 6:27 pm | |
| Is it books? Reading? I seriously have no idea, but the 'it can be read' part opens up the book/reading idea. What about our hearts? Sometimes people can 'read' those. Gosh, you made this hard. | |
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Rachelle41
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Posts : 269
WL Points : 28818
Join date : 2010-02-26
Age : 26
Location : Witts End.
| | Subject: Re: Guess Thu Feb 24, 2011 9:35 pm | |
| I shall wait for a few more people to guess before I reveal the mystery. However, it itsn't books/reading, although that is a very good guess. | |
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giraffe22
Junior Writer
Posts : 82
WL Points : 24951
Join date : 2010-11-26
Age : 25
Location : Camp Half-Blood during the Summer or Hogwarts during the school year.
| | Subject: Re: Guess Thu Feb 24, 2011 10:23 pm | |
| Good poem! I am guessing ........ Nature? | |
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Rachelle41
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Posts : 269
WL Points : 28818
Join date : 2010-02-26
Age : 26
Location : Witts End.
| | Subject: Re: Guess Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:14 pm | |
| It's not nature either, although, I can see your point of view. Keep on guessing! -Rachelle41  | |
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Luv2Type
Instructor
Posts : 402
WL Points : 31579
Join date : 2010-02-22
Age : 26
Location : Atlanta, Geogria
| | Subject: Re: Guess Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:55 pm | |
| Oh come on. Uhhhhhh-imagination! Ha ha! I bet I'm right!  | |
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Rachelle41
Instructor
Posts : 269
WL Points : 28818
Join date : 2010-02-26
Age : 26
Location : Witts End.
| | Subject: Re: Guess Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:33 pm | |
| No, it's not imagination either. I'll give you a hint. Most people like it, and alot of people can make it, although there's a lot more to learn that what appears at first.
-Rachelle41 | |
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giraffe22
Junior Writer
Posts : 82
WL Points : 24951
Join date : 2010-11-26
Age : 25
Location : Camp Half-Blood during the Summer or Hogwarts during the school year.
| | Subject: Re: Guess Sat Feb 26, 2011 5:51 pm | |
| My sister Jeana guessed this, Peace! | |
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