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PostSubject: Those Little Ones   Those Little Ones EmptyThu Mar 04, 2010 10:58 pm

Little Light
surrounded
in darkness

Small Hope
leading
survivors

Tender heart
braving the
bloodshed

Last life
in the
dead
if the
battlefield

Memories
flooded
with pain

Standing alone
stranded in rain

I remember
those moments in life
not the big but the little.

The ones that matter
are the little ones
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PostSubject: Re: Those Little Ones   Those Little Ones EmptyFri Mar 05, 2010 9:14 am

Very true! The point of your poem strayed away from little things in darkness to little moments, but it was an excellent poem!

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