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PostSubject: Tiger Fight   Sat Jan 01, 2011 2:35 pm

Dark light in my eyes
anger is my haze
My claws want purchase
red is my gaze

Fear is your eyes
flitting through face
now it is steal
without a trace

I pull up my sneer
and replace it with scowl
I lower my tail
its time for the prowl

crouching fire
claws unsheathed
it is time

I know it needs punctuation but could anyone help?

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PostSubject: Re: Tiger Fight   Sat Jan 01, 2011 6:56 pm

Okay, I like it, but since its uncompleted I guess I can't completely judge. Finish soon please!
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