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PostSubject: Ruby- the hound   Mon Dec 27, 2010 2:40 am

Darkest day
Lightest hour
Blue as water
Ruby's hour
paw by paw
through the light
there she walks
shadow's night
a thistle up on
her ruddy tale
a tickles hair
stays through the hail
and last not least
all in the powers
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PostSubject: Re: Ruby- the hound   Mon Dec 27, 2010 4:43 pm

Hm. Go rhyme, but maybe you could use some punctuation? Otherwise, we read write through the thing, though I have the feeling you want us to pause at every line.
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PostSubject: OOOOOOPS   Tue Dec 28, 2010 1:40 am

Excuse my lack of punctuation. Sometimes I get so excited I just keep on writing. 'll fix it. Thanks Luv!
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PostSubject: Re: Ruby- the hound   Tue Dec 28, 2010 3:13 pm

I must remind you not to use the Decriptions or Title Color options, Arrow. They're for Admins only ^^

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PostSubject: Ohhh   Tue Dec 28, 2010 4:21 pm

I'm sorry, I didn't no. My bad
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