- Spoiler:
The key line for this poem was inspired by the same line in Daughtry's What About Now. However the real inspiration for the poem is Christ and the promises he makes.
Matthew 28: 19-20:
19“Go therefore and make disciples of all the nations, baptizing them
in the name of the Father, and of the Son
and of the Holy Spirit
20Teaching them to observe all things that I have commanded you;
and lo, I am with you always, even to the end of the age.”
Amen.
(Words of Christ in red)
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Love Will Find You
Where the desert rolls into the ocean,
And the midnight sun burns the back,
When the bombs shriek by,
their exhaust burning the air in hot song
Love will find you.
In the shadows of Hell,
Where the screams subside to Satan's breathing,
Silence fills the air as he stares at you and taunts,
You break down, tears and sweat, and the gnashing of teeth,
Love will find you.
As the blade sears through your heart and soul,
And you're caught in the wildest storm,
There comes the lifeline, there is the beacon...
In the highest sky, as you fall,
Love will catch you, Love will find you
And in the dark whirlpool where the world meets its Prince,
As you drown, keep breathing,
As you choke, keep singing,
As you fade, keep watching,
I promise friend...
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*Do you think the last bit was too hangy? I was actually trying to get the reader to finish the line themselves, but I'm worried there wasn't enough repetition for that to be clear
*How was the rhythm?
*How was the imagery?
*My favourite stanzas are the last two because they have the most action and you can see things happening. Am I wrong, was there plenty of action throughout the whole poem or is that unecessary?
*How did this make you feel?
*Was there anything you found metaphoric? Any metaphors you found?
*Christian or not, is that kind of promise beautiful (whether naive or over-optimistic)
*Thanks for reading*