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PostSubject: What If I Said   Sun Feb 28, 2010 4:19 pm

The wind and the waves move together.
One heartbeat that cries and whishes with each other.
Regretting its natural thing to destroy.
What if I said I just couldn't love you.
The wind and the waves would blow and cry just the same.
What if I said.
What if I said.
That the rose you gave me might as well wilt and die.
Which wouldn't cause me to cry, neither if you said 'no more love'.
What if I said.
What if I said.
That I am free
But your love is a pair of chains.
What if I said that I just couldn't love you.
At least my wind and waves would blow just the same.
Yours would cease.
And my heart would not thump sorrow.
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PostSubject: Re: What If I Said   Sun Feb 28, 2010 4:21 pm

This just sorta came out. Original the 'what if I said' and 'what if I said that I just couldn't love you' was sung and I turned it into a poem. Maybe I'll finish the song too, which has the same name.
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PostSubject: Re: What If I Said   Sun Feb 28, 2010 4:38 pm

Woah. Deep, girl! Do more more more!
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