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PostSubject: The Dandelions   Mon Dec 20, 2010 6:25 pm

I used to play amongst the flowers
And I admired the dandelions.
They reminded me of myself:
A wild flower
amongst tulips and roses.
They seemed to not meet the standards
because they set their own.
They were often short,
looked down upon in the flower society
For they were a bland white.
Not pink.
not purple.
And they would pop up
in the middle of my mother's flower bed
but when it came to personality and survival
it was always the dandelions that stood standing

Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass; It's about learning to dance in the rain.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dandelions   Mon Dec 20, 2010 7:51 pm

I like it. You can picture dandelions easily and so many people say it's a weed, but I think it's a flower too. And the part about setting their own standards-I like it! Good job.
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PostSubject: Re: The Dandelions   Mon Dec 20, 2010 8:20 pm

My parents always said that dandelions were weeds, alothough I insisted that they were flowers. I like this. It shows a little bit about life. The pretty "flowers" always have the best of everything, but the "dandelions" are happier. I put quotes around flowers becuase they're so much like people.
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