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PostSubject: Lies (by Swishehs)   Sun Feb 28, 2010 2:56 pm

I live a lie - a constant dream,
a hope of something daftly supreme.
Some day I will see it again,
the truth that held me in the wind.

A mask of current gossip stains
the outlines of my narrow veins;
the difference in my heart and mind,
a sum of being cold and kind.

I'm pulled from varying truths to live
the lie that's forced upon my lips,
a freezing wake that stabs my conscience
a falsely warm and shroud acceptance.

It's sorry, to say, with all these clouds
a sun is shining all about,
tangled in my hopes and lies,
the sun, so bright, the alibi.

I wish to bask in all it's glory,
to sit and forget this forged story.
Please just tell me one last time,
if I ask you, will you rhyme?

The words are woven in delicacy -
I'm brought to tears by clear melody,
love, my dear, is not a lie
but surely this one has to die.

I live a life so warm and free,
the sunlight shining down at me,
I run from darkness, hating night,
a facade of being strong and bright.
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PostSubject: Re: Lies (by Swishehs)   Sun Feb 28, 2010 4:07 pm

Wow. Swish, that is deep. Its amazing, I love it. Its- undescribable. Its just, amazing. Expressive. Deep. Full of feeling. Your letting burdens out with that and its just simply amazing. Incrediable. Theres no way to fully describe it.
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