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NikkiSwift
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PostSubject: The Fearless and the Vampire   Sat Nov 27, 2010 8:48 pm

"Ow! OW!" I shriek like a devilish hawk.

He stares at me with those cold, chocolate brown eyes of his. A smile eventually creeps up his face. Can't he see I'm not amused by this? I tug at my hair to free myself, but my wavy golden locks are tangled pretty well on the branch.

"Do you mind helping me out of this?" I hiss at him.

He shrugs and then straightens his shirt.

"Well, if I must. But that position suits you very nicely."

"Shut up and help me, you stupid vampire!" I scream at him. I'm furious.

"Fine." Was all he said. He began climbing up the tree. I stand there waiting for him with my arms crossed. It was entertaining to see him climb it, though, because he utterly sucked at it. I toss a pebble at him just for fun.

"That didn't hurt."

"Demon." I mutter under my breath but loud enough for him to hear.

"I heard that." He snickers.

"You were meant to." But this time, I'm not as angry as I was before. I even give in to 1/3 a smile.
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PostSubject: Re: The Fearless and the Vampire   Sun Nov 28, 2010 4:38 pm

I like it. A little whimsical, but stil slightly realistic, and shockingly belivable. I usually hate anything about vampires, though.
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