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NikkiSwift
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PostSubject: In The Land of Kings and Queens and Dreams :)   Fri Nov 12, 2010 11:40 pm

In the land of kings and queens
Lies a princess with long flowing hair
With a sign on her tower door saying
'All witches beware'

In the land of wizards and witches
Sits a handsome prince of many beautiful riches
He holds his head high with pride
But he wonders what's on the other side
Of the coin he has not yet flipped

In the land of swords and shields
The ship has at last sailed
One's scars shall never be healed
The battle has finally prevailed

In the land of rubies and gold
There is one thing that will never be sold
But reader, don't you see?
It's the gift a young child's dreams.

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PostSubject: I'm Replying   Sat Nov 13, 2010 4:41 pm

I like that. I wish I hadn't given up my dream. I guess you can never sell a dream, but you sure can give up on it or give it away. It's a really nice poem. You didn't rhyme all the time, but it was lovely.
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