Wonderland
Would you like to react to this message? Create an account in a few clicks or log in to continue.


Where you wander around, review, and post your literary works!
 
HomeLatest imagesRegisterLog in

 

 In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter)

Go down 
2 posters
AuthorMessage
NikkiSwift
Honorable Writer
Honorable Writer
NikkiSwift


Posts : 225
WL Points : 27979
Join date : 2010-05-14
Age : 25
Location : Camp Half Blood ♥

In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) Empty
PostSubject: In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter)   In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) EmptySat Nov 13, 2010 10:23 am

I leaped over the sharp rocks. The darkened forest grew endless. I had to run. I just had to. I couldn't force myself to stop. I had to get away from this place- the place where I had witness my mother's and siblings' slaughter. The smell of their blood haunted me. It replayed the scene of their murder in my head. I could see my hot breath in the air. White fluffy snow blanketed the twigs and stones, but it also made it harder to escape. Was this it? I wouldn't dare turn back, in fear he would catch me. I shivered. A few fallen trees blocked my normal passageway. Soon, I had ran too far off course. I heard nothing for a while.
I heard a sudden twig break. I turned around. A tall slender silhouette was tracking my every move. And then it was so quick, but so painful. Something struck me in the chest. My knees gave way. I fell down headfirst into the snow. It was a shade of crimson red. Then I realized, the snow was stained with my blood. I reckon my icy blue eyes looked as if I were about to faint, because reader, he caught me.

~Nikki
~Err. . . .I was bored. . . . Came off the top of my head. Though it seems very familiar. . .


Last edited by NikkiSwift on Sat Nov 13, 2010 11:39 pm; edited 1 time in total
Back to top Go down
Rachelle41
Instructor
Instructor
Rachelle41


Posts : 269
WL Points : 28713
Join date : 2010-02-26
Age : 26
Location : Witts End.

In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) Empty
PostSubject: I'm Replying   In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) EmptySat Nov 13, 2010 4:45 pm

That was really good if you came up with it on the top of your head. Is the man that caught the wolf a vampire, and is s werewolf or a regular wolf? I think it was really goo, considering that when I try to some up with something off the top of my head, it usually fails.
-Rachelle41 I love you
Back to top Go down
NikkiSwift
Honorable Writer
Honorable Writer
NikkiSwift


Posts : 225
WL Points : 27979
Join date : 2010-05-14
Age : 25
Location : Camp Half Blood ♥

In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) Empty
PostSubject: Re: In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter)   In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) EmptySat Nov 13, 2010 7:43 pm

Nah. Nothing too complicated. Just a wolf running for her life as the determined hunter (with a gun) chases her. She had just witnessed her family being shot by him, so she fled, trying to escape the scene and hopefully avoid the same fate. Smile But yeah, I just woke up and started typing.
~Nikki
Back to top Go down
Rachelle41
Instructor
Instructor
Rachelle41


Posts : 269
WL Points : 28713
Join date : 2010-02-26
Age : 26
Location : Witts End.

In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) Empty
PostSubject: Re: In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter)   In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) EmptySat Nov 13, 2010 7:51 pm

Interesting. I could never wake up and just write a story. Usually stories begin as scenes in my head, then reach paper. Writing on a whim is hard for me. But you can do it really well.
-Rachelle41 I love you
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content





In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) Empty
PostSubject: Re: In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter)   In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter) Empty

Back to top Go down
 
In the Eyes of a Wolf (Short Story/ Chapter)
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» A Short Story
» Blind of Nothing, A Short Story
» Blind But Not, Another Short Story
» Glück (Short Story)
» Blue Eyes Chapter 3

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Wonderland :: Literary :: Prose-
Jump to: