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PostSubject: Break Even (Preface)   Break Even (Preface) EmptyFri Nov 05, 2010 9:20 pm

When a solid thing breaks, most of the time it doesn't break even. Am I right? So, when a heart breaks, it doesn't break even. When someone dies that is like your other half, your heart breaks. Chances are the bigger half goes with your other half. That is what happened. My mother died. We were so close. She was my other half. If you had opened us up, you would have found that we each had half of the others heart. My bigger half went to her grave with her. I put a note on her grave when she died. It said "I loved you in life, Mom, and I love you even more in death." It meant that I loved her so much when she was alive, and I love her even though she is dead. She was the woman who inspired me to follow my dream. The one and only dream that I have had since I was a young child : to be an Olympic god medalist in skiiing. She drove me to every one of my lessons when I started to ski at age 4, and supported me until her death. I vow, on my mother wonderful life, I will do all I can to honour her with something that doesn't even come sclose to a worthy memorial: an Olympic gold medal. That promise begins right now.
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PostSubject: Re: Break Even (Preface)   Break Even (Preface) EmptySat Nov 06, 2010 10:27 am

I knew this would lead to some Olympos stuff :3

I found a few grammar mistakes, but not many. Just an extra space or a misspelled word. Like hounor. It's honor. xD
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PostSubject: Re: Break Even (Preface)   Break Even (Preface) EmptyWed Nov 10, 2010 11:00 pm

I'm not going to continue this story. I need a fresh topice;I always write about the Olympics. I'm obssesd. lol!
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