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 The Luckiest Girl: Chapter Two, Part Two

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PostSubject: The Luckiest Girl: Chapter Two, Part Two   The Luckiest Girl: Chapter Two, Part Two EmptyWed Sep 22, 2010 8:46 pm

The shrill bell rang as I stared at the note, my vision blurring and going clear, then blurring again. I heard the shuffle of papers and a zipper next to me as Justin stood to leave. All I could do was sit there. Sighing, I realized that I was eventually going to have to leave.
I packed up my textbook, binders, the likes. Standing up, I saw the figure of someone next to me. I took a quick intake of breath and tuned to see Tinsley standing there. Her sleek, dark hair was cascading down her back. Her arms were folded over her chest.
"Oh, hey Tinsley." I murmured the greeting, turning to continue packing my bag.
When I looked up again, she was closer.
I flinched and backed away a few steps.
"You stay away from him, Knott." She hissed. "Or we will have problems." She glared at me and walked out the door, her hair hitting my face as she did.

Crap.

I slammed my head on the desk as the late bell rang.

(Sorry, short entry!)
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PostSubject: I'm replying!   The Luckiest Girl: Chapter Two, Part Two EmptyWed Sep 22, 2010 8:52 pm

Wow, Cheez! I'm glad that you added some suspense to it. Not to mention drama! Wow! It doesn't matter to terribly much how long/short a story is as long as it is good. And this was really good. You should really start a poll for this story. I know that I'm not going to keep my story, Beauty Is Only Skin Deep, until I get at least 11 votes and see what the public want. Anyway, great story! I can't wait to see what happenes next! Remember, if they do date you have to include papazzai and other fans, especially girls. Great job!
-Rachelle41 I love you
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