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PostSubject: my beloved heart   Fri Feb 26, 2010 7:52 pm

My heart has been ripped out today
by someone I held near.
they whispered little words, they thought,
that I'd might like to hear
I rest upon this rock
and tell
my sad story to you
make sure you know who loves you
this I want you to hear,
make sure you know who loves you
so you can save a tear.
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PostSubject: Re: my beloved heart   Sat Feb 27, 2010 6:40 pm

Beautiful, absoulutly beautiful. I love it. Expression, rythming and heart is in this. Ver good arrow!
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