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PostSubject: The Luckiest Girl   Mon Aug 30, 2010 8:59 pm

"He's here! Ohmygawd, he's HERE!" I winced as my best friend, Grace, freaked out in my ear.
"Can you BELIEVE this, Sarah? You can't, can you?! No, of course you can't!" I sighed. So what? Justin Bieber is going to our school. Why should I care? He probably wants the fabulous rich girls who he hangs out with every day after his concerts. Why would I chase after him just to be disappointed?
I shouldn't.
I didn't.
But he did.
Why did he? I dunno, I may never know. Grace and I were pushing through the crowd of screaming girls and I dropped by books. Sighing, I leaned down to pick them up. As I did, my head hit something. Something hard. After that, things got fuzzy. All I really remember was a haze of a voice saying, "Oh, gosh, sorry! Are you okay?" And the only clear thing being two dark brown eyes looking into mine.

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Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass; It's about learning to dance in the rain.
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PostSubject: Re: The Luckiest Girl   Mon Aug 30, 2010 9:29 pm

XD I shoulda known you'd write a Bieber fanfic, cheez-chama! If I was a Bieber fan, I'd be impressed...But I'm not! Curse his catchy tunes! XD Pretty good, though you should make these longer. Makes 'em more entertaining to read, and doesn't chop things up as much.

Oh...and I'm CONSIDERING writing a...Ja-cough-cob. Bl-cough-ackt. Fanfic. Maybe. I just had a reeeally good idea. I'm not a fan or anything (deNIAL!). What say you, Capt'n Cheez? XD Always wanted to say that...

So, anyways, IF I was a Bieber fan, I would enjoy it....XD I just totally went in a circle...Where am I...?

~Tobi~
S'been real...Remember, longer, so I can read more at once! And you didn't hear that from me, it was some anonymous Bieber fan...XD

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Life is like thunder; powerful, confusing, wonderous, loud, inexplainable, sudden, beautiful in ways you can't even begin to describe, and completely unexpected. Death is like lightning; it strikes even the most powerful things, and shoots through the ground to everyone nearby, leaving them with only a painful aftershock.

Almost dying changes nothing. Dying changes everything.

Cry me a river, build a bridge, and get over it.
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PostSubject: I'm replying!   Tue Aug 31, 2010 4:52 pm

That is an awesome plot! Plus, i totally understand where you are coming from. I didn't want to like Justin Bieber, but somehow, I did. Maybe if you continued it, it would be even better.
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PostSubject: Re: The Luckiest Girl   Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:45 pm

I like it! Like, seriously, I like it a lot! More, more, more, more, more! PLease?
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