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Is This A Good Song?
A) This is a great song! Is she going to write more?
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B) It's not great, but it's good.
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C) What made her write this song in the first place? It's terrible!
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PostSubject: Never Again by me   Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:20 pm

I said, after the last one, I'd never do it again.
Then how come I'm finding myself here?
The hurt, the pain, I said never again.
But it just goes out the other ear.
Why doen't I listen to myself and avoid the pain?
How do I always end up here?
How many times you broken my heart, and always tried to repair it?
Never again, never again!
I always ay it, why won't it come true/
Never again, never again!
I know, I should let go of you.
Your face, stays in my mind, wherever I go
There's no getting away.
I like, you, then I don't
So what's the use, of trying to get away?
Never again, is what I said.
But it will always be that way.
I can never listen to myself.


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PostSubject: I'm replying! (To myself!)   Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:21 pm

The song wasn't done, but that is what I had so far, so I wrote it down. I hope you like it!
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PostSubject: =O   Sun Aug 29, 2010 3:44 pm

Whoa. That's all I can say. I wrote a song, too! I'm not sure about postin it, but yours is wicked awesome! Finish it soon!

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