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PostSubject: That's Love by me, for Jesus   Mon Jun 21, 2010 5:43 pm

When I first found you.
I really wanted you.
All I really wanted was your love.
A place of peace and rest.
Better than the best.
That's what Jesus's arms are.

Cause thats all I want.
And that's all I need.
A place where your love,
surronds me.

Cause all I want it you!
And all I need is you!
Its more than I could ever be,
more than what I dream.
And all I really need,
is one step away!
One more step and I'll be seeing,
through smoke.
That's love!

After I was done.
Everything had changed.
All that really mattered was your love.
Singing, voices, ears (might change to fears).
All that was near,
except for Jesus, might have been air!

Cause that's all I want.
And thats all I need.
A place where your love,
surronds me.

Cause all I want is you!
And all I need it you!
Its more than I could ever be,
more than what I dream.
And all I really need,
is one step away!
One more step and I'll be seeing,
through smoke.
That's love!


Sacifice!, pain for the other.
That's love.
Giving up all!
Thats love.


This I might/probably will sing in my school talent show this year. If I get in, but thats up to Jesus. Anyways, this is about my Wake Up Weekend experiance, with some other stuff taken out/put in. Thanks for reading!
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PostSubject: Re: That's Love by me, for Jesus   Wed Jun 23, 2010 3:41 pm

I like, but it's a little mushy. But the message is clear! I do like that.

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PostSubject: Re: That's Love by me, for Jesus   Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:23 pm

What do you mean, a little mushy? By the way, I want to sing this in the talent show this/next year. Only, I'd need some music. You can write guitar music, right? Anyways, I hope we can work something out. Thank for the complement though. I love you
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PostSubject: Re: That's Love by me, for Jesus   Wed Jun 23, 2010 4:27 pm

I would be honored to write the music for this! And it's a little dramatic is what I meant :]

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