Tobi's Totally Tantalizing Reviews XD

Well, hello there everyone, I'm Tobi-chan. I'm a quirky, most unusual person, and I enjoy taking others by surprise. Human nature amuses me, though I'm often agitated by how shallow some girls are. Moving on, I'm one of the smart kids, I suppose, as well as one of the few people who reads and writes in their spare time. I love to play the piano, soccer, volleyball, and I honestly wish I could play the cello. My favorite kind of music is rock, and my favorite bands include Escape the Fate, Linkin Park, Evanescence, and Paramore...in addition to heavy doses of J-pop/J-rock. I'm supposed to be a Baptist, but I'm open to all faiths, pretty much. I'm a peacemaker (and a sloth) by nature...So, nice to make your acquaintance, fellow outcasts~!


Well, let's see...Hm. I'll review any genre, really. But I suppose I have my personal preferences. In no specific order...

1) Romance
2) Sci-fi
3) Tragedy
4) Fantasy
5) Horror
6) Action/Adventure
7) Historical Fiction
8/ Fanfiction
9) Comedy

I don't dislike any particular genre. Sorry, but there's just none I won't review....Although, I must say, I'm not very skilled at poetry. I could review it for grammar, but not for the quality of the poetry itself. Though I've read the series, I'm not fond of Twilight, so anything involving that is out for me. So...

1) Poetry
2) Twilight

After reading various posts, I have come to one conclusion; you guys need some help in the grammar department. I'm a straight A student, but English/LA is undoubtably my best subject, and I can recognize a grammatical error when I see one. I'll also assist with ideas, style, and random conversation (haha). I can write and review any point of view, be it first, second, or third, so there's no problem there. In addition, I'm an avid fanfiction author, so for those of you who like manga/anime, I can lend a helping hand as far as background information and the overall story (like the all important question, "To follow the plotline, or to create an original storyline?")...Savvy~?

Well, I hope that's semi-acceptable, cheez~!


Hmm...So far, my list includes,

1) cheez_burger (in progress)
2) grace1069 (completed)

Well now, looks like y'all better get busy and request my services, eh~?

~Tobi~

Hi Tobi! I was wondering if you could review all five of my Guardians pieces for me? It's in Prose...Thanks [:

~Cheez~

Hey Tobi!
Do you think you could review my script. It's romance, so I suppose it's right up your alley. But, just so you know, it's REALLY sappy romance. Like, REALLY REALLY sappy. But that is just the way I like it! Also, it is my first time EVER writing a script, so... Ouch. IDK. Maybe it's OK, but I could seriously use some pointers if you have any. Just let me know!

Many thanks, my friend!

Write On,
Grace1096

So, Tobi, since you're a member of fanfiction.net, would you mind reviewing my story on there? I am posting the chapters in here, if you would rather keep it on Wonderland. My penname is TheEvilQueen and teh story is What She Meant By Forever. If you're under beta readers on there, give me your penname. Please.

I've recently changed my name, so it's "Tobi LeeWok Z" now. I have no idea where the "Wok" came from, but I usually shorten my middle name to Lee or Leo...XD I am a beta-reader, actually, though I don't usually review the works I beta-read (I give my opinion as I go, and by the time I'm done, I've usually read the work a plethora of times). I can do both if you'd like, though. I usually beta-read through Google Docs. Would you like to give it a try?

~Tobi

I'm actually looking into another beta-reader. I'd just like more than one person to review my work. I'd love you to review on either Wonderland or here. On fanfiction, though, I just posted the 4th chapter, so you'll probably be more up-to-date that way. Don't beta read. Just be a loyal reader and review/PM me true critisim.

Aww. You don't trust my expert opinion? ;.; I'm the resident expert on fairy tales, you know. I love to research all of the different versions...I hope Peter Pan shows up in Once Upon a time. That's my current fav, especially seeing as it's so historically based...
But I guess I'm not too hurt. When you do have your work beta-read, though, give Google Documents a try; the commenting system is very convenient for editing. And admittedly, I'm currently working very hard for another author, but I was willing to make the extra time commitment... Well, I was sort of willing. I like my sleep, you know. ;D
XD Okie dokie, then! I'll just do the usual and drop you some reviews! I'm usual not a very loyal reviewer, though I read practically religiously, but you're such a doll, how could I not advise you? Let's have fun with this!

~Tobi