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PostSubject: Fighting for my Life by Savannah Outen   Sat Jun 12, 2010 8:05 pm

You stole my words and twisted them to yours 'till there was
Nothing left to say
You were the chill, in the air whenever I turned
Turned away
Honestly, you had to know how much it was killing me
I had no choice, I just had to leave

You tried to lock the door with me forever
But I broke my own way out
You tried to build a wall to tell me never, but I was never backing down
Oh you tried to take my wings I, I just kept on flying
Fighting, fighting, fighting for my life!

Did your best to twist the lie and hold me under till I couldn't see
Tried your hardest to take and break the voice that I have deep inside of me
I cant pretend I didn't learn the hard way but never again
You had your chance but it just had to end

You tried to lock the door with me forever
But I broke my own way out
You tried to build a wall to tell me never, but I was never backing down
Oh you tried to take my wings I, I just kept on flying
Fighting, fighting, fighting for my life!

No you wont take me crying
No more tears falling on the floor
All the pain that Ive survived
Made me stronger than ever before~, yeah

You tried to lock the door with me forever
But I broke my own way out
You tried to build a wall to tell me never, but I was never backing down
Oh you tried to take my wings I, I just kept on flying
Fighting, fighting, fighting for my life!

You tried to lock the door with me forever
But I broke my own way out
You tried to build a wall to tell me never, but I was never backing down
Oh you tried to take my wings I, I just kept on flying
Fighting, fighting, fighting for my life!

~Nikki


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PostSubject: Re: Fighting for my Life by Savannah Outen   Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:04 pm

Oh my gosh! This is SO good!!!! Did you write that? I'm guessing you did since it said Nikki at the bottem. Really, this is super good. You can write practically anything! It rocks! You'll have to post more of your songs. I really liked this one. I felt a connection, but I can't explain how. Anyways, its AWESOME!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: Fighting for my Life by Savannah Outen   Mon Jun 14, 2010 3:08 pm

Aww..... I'm glad you like that song, but actually, I didn't write it. You know the girl named Samantha Outen? She wrote that and I thought y'all would like it. I'm so happy you thought it. Hahaha sorry I fooled you though. I'll be sure to write another song that you'll LOVE.
~All promises, Nikki
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PostSubject: Re: Fighting for my Life by Savannah Outen   Wed Jun 16, 2010 12:20 pm

Hey Nikki!
Glad you posted this! I enjoyed it, BUT....
You could probably put a note in the beginning telling the people it's not yours [: I REALLY liked it though! Keep it up! Very Happy


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PostSubject: Re: Fighting for my Life by Savannah Outen   Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:57 pm

Thanks for being truthful Nikki! You know, some people might have just stolen it. After all, before you posted that it wasn't yours most people thought it was. You could enjoy the 'glory' of it because none of us (or very few of us) know Samantha Outen. Good job truthful buddy!
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PostSubject: Re: Fighting for my Life by Savannah Outen   Wed Jul 07, 2010 9:31 am

(btw) her name is savannah outen Very Happy
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