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NikkiSwift
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PostSubject: "Why (Y)"   Mon May 24, 2010 10:25 pm

Look down that hall,
Did you see anything at all?
Did you see me?
Or did you just turn and look away?

If I had a chance
To tell you about this
I would say one thing
I could be your anything

I wish you could see
What you are
And what you mean
What you mean to me

Your one plus a million,
No, one plus a billion
Then again you turn away
One and a trillion chances,
That you'll notice me

Everything to me is new
But to you
Your sky is your very own kind of blue
One in a million chances
I would say
'One plus a million'
'Equals you'

If I could say want I wanna say
I'd say I would blow you away
Away with me
On my journey
To prove myself worthy
Of your love

Lay in bed
Stars are lined in the night sky
As I think to myself
Why?
Would you tell anyone
If I were to die
Die for you?

As you walk by
I let out a cry
One of heartbreak
And one of a lie
I turn my head away
And I say in a whisper
'Those things I'd never say'
'Will be forever myster-'
'Y'

~I felt this while I was watching the stars on our balcony. It just came suddenly. I hope you like it. Nikki


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PostSubject: Re: "Why (Y)"   Tue May 25, 2010 5:27 pm

Girl, you HOPE? Who wouldn't like this poem? Love, wanting, heartbreak. Deepness. Thought. Care. Love. A true wanting. Expression. Seeable. Those things are in the poem. Thats what you put in. Its deep. It has thought. Full of care when they feel invisible. Love for the other. Love for the poem. A true wanting for something she probably won't have. Expression in how you might love someone or something. You can see it in your mind. Every scene. You're amazing! Dang girl, you were born a poet. Keep writing this good and you'll be a child poet (or author or both).
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PostSubject: Yay!!!!!   Tue May 25, 2010 5:32 pm

Aww!! I'm so thrilled you love it! I Luv poetry. It's amazing and can be so easy and quick to write at the same time! Glad to hear your opinion!!
~ A Very Excited Nikki
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