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NikkiSwift
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PostSubject: Dear Diary   Sun May 16, 2010 10:35 am

The Diary
Dear Diary,
Full of devotion and secrets
Kept safe in my heart,
As if a part
Of my complicated, overrated life.

Dear Diary,
Full of questions and answers
Worn on my sleeve,
As if I were a childish schoolgirl
In this lonely and misunderstood world.

Dear Diary,
Today was a tragedy
I ran home crying a waterfall of tears
I tripped,
I stumbled,
Right into His arms.

Dear Diary,
I am a new person
Full of His truth,
Understanding fir the broken
I traveled through the Valley of Death
I am full of hope.

Dear Diary,
I found a remedy
I shall travel 'round this broken world,
Sharing hope through the Lord
I shall praise him more and more,
Today and forever more. ~ Nikki

(I was thinking on putting this to music, so give me your opinion!)


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PostSubject: I liked it!   Sun May 16, 2010 11:04 am

That was really good! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Diary   Sun May 16, 2010 1:46 pm

Aww, thanks! It came to me like that. I might even put it to song. *shrugs* I'm expecting to do some more. Thank you for the encouragement!
~Nikki
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