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 A friend By:Cera West

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PostSubject: A friend By:Cera West   Wed May 05, 2010 6:28 pm

As i look into your eyes
learn that theres nothing to despize
Cause every time i see you smile
i could walk a mile
but no matter what
even in the end
youre still my friend

even when you say you hate me
and ignore me
i still trust you with my secrets
and i have no regrets
i have no dispare
even though i cannot repair
a broken relation
the failure is... my creation
you fill the empty hole in my heart
Every word you say is like art
it makes me feel like i could fall apart
this has to be for real
because its the way i feel
I rather be friends forever
its way that never
no matter what
even in the end
youre still my friend
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PostSubject: Awww...   Wed May 05, 2010 8:39 pm

That's a great poem...Gee, all my poetry is depressing, but this is a different, inspiring kind! I'm amazed, Cera!

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Life is like thunder; powerful, confusing, wonderous, loud, inexplainable, sudden, beautiful in ways you can't even begin to describe, and completely unexpected. Death is like lightning; it strikes even the most powerful things, and shoots through the ground to everyone nearby, leaving them with only a painful aftershock.

Almost dying changes nothing. Dying changes everything.

Cry me a river, build a bridge, and get over it.
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PostSubject: Re: A friend By:Cera West   Mon May 10, 2010 5:47 pm

Thank you very much Tobi-chan!!!! bffl!
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