Sara-Alysse13666
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Join date : 2010-03-12
Age : 26
Location : Winston-Salem
 |  Subject: Who By: Cera West <3 Mon May 03, 2010 5:48 pm | |
| Whose hand I see out stretched
Whose name I never even catched
To see his face again
To dear life I clenched…
The ink dried under my pen
From writing his name again and again
My bare walls became black
My love for his will never end
I made a vow to love and I will never go back
but it’s you love I lack
I will climb the highest mountains just to see you
When I get you my love will be back on track
The love I portray is for you
I only tell you because it’s true
I love you
I love you | |
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Tobi-chan
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Join date : 2010-04-29
Age : 30
Location : Looking for a way out of Purgatory.
| | Subject: Who knew... Mon May 03, 2010 9:37 pm | |
| Wooow! You have a gift for poetry...despite it being about your one and only obsession.  I never would've guessd you'd write it about that! Just kidding, it was amazing! And it rhymed! I can never rhyme in poetry...it takes too long. Despite a few gramatical errors, it was probably better than anything I could've done...aha...  ~Tobi~ | |
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